My summer poem
Rushed on the bus
but would not hush.
We raced to the caves
Should have heard the raves
Back on the bus - dust.
Picked worms off the wall
got surprised by a massive fall.
Looked at my room
feeling pretty doomed
Smashed into the water
We played volleyball
and bounced some balls.
Kia ora Hannah, my name is Jaelyn - Marie I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I really like your blog about My Summer because you added what you did in the summer but it was in a rhymey way and it was fun to read. I also like your blog post because you added a lot of detail.
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Kia ora my name is Tiiria and I go to Paihia School. I really like your blog because it is interesting. I also like your blog post because you have a lot of detail in your words. I also like it because you are doing some poems that are really and sound amazing. I also like your poems because the words you rime are really interesting.
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Kia ora Hannah my name is Angela and I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I like your blog post because you added detail to what you did in the summer. I also like your blog post because instead of just writing a story you made it rhyme which I thought was really interesting. What was your favourite thing you did in summer?
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