Hannah
Is
adventurous risk-taking creative
Relative of
Natasha Leef and Craig Oughton
Who loves
Ivy Rose swimming at high tide dreaming
Who hates
donuts goody-goody gumdrop ice cream
Pizza hut
Who dreams of
being rich owning a school going to university
Who fears
seaweed fish fights
Who would like to see
Canada snow a big city at night
Who is determined to
have a fancy house have a great family be rich
Who values
my room tasty food friends
Who is proud of
my Minecraft world my sims 4 house knowing my times tables
Who lives in
Herekino New Zealand Earth
Oughton
kiaora hannah
ReplyDeleteits madie here i love how you shared your bio poem and i hope you had fun doing it. from Madie/bean
Hello Hannah, my name is Angela and I am a student who attends Paihia School. I really enjoyed your blog post because you told me a little bit about yourself. I love how you added detail and exciting words so it is not boring. From your blog post I learnt that you and I both don’t like goody goody gumdrops but we both love swimming at high tide.
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Hi my name is Indie I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I really liked your poem is because it was really interesting and amazing. You should do more poems because It is really amazing how you could write a poem. I thought you would be a fantastic poem writer because you are really great at writing them. Do you think you would make a great poem writer?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Hannah, my name is Jaelyn - Marie I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I really like your blog about Hannah's bio Poem. I really like your blog post because it was fun to read and learn somethings about you. I also like your blog post because you added a lot of detail. I have done something like this but it was a bit different.
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Kia ora Hannah, my name is Tiiria and I’m a year 6 at Paihia School. In your blog I really liked your poem that you wrote about yourself. I like it because your showing a lot of detail about you. Your also showing detail about what you like and your funny dreams. I also like how you wrote that you were funny and how you like swimming at high tide because I go swimming a lot and i like going when its high tide to.
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Hi Hannah, my name is Tiana and I’m a year 7 student from Paihia School. I really like your blog post because it tells me somethings about you, such as what you like to eat. In the future I would like to write a poem about me.
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Hi Hannah my name is Mikaire and I am a year 8 student attending Paihia School. I like your poem because you told me a bit about you. I like taking risks as well I have also seen snow and it is very cold. I am not a fan of goody goody gum drop ice cream as well I prefer chocolate.
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Hi Hannah my name is Anika and I am student at Paihia School. I really liked your bio poem because it was entertaining to read and I learnt something about you. I really enjoy swimming at high tide too because the tide is highest and I am close to the shore. Why do you like swimming at high tide?
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah, my name is Ashlyn and I go to Paihia School. I really like your post it was really interesting because I like swimming at high tide too. I could also tell you put lots of effort into making it. How long did your bio poem take you?
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