Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hello Hannah my name is Jaelyn - Marie, I am a Year 6 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about “captivating recount” because I like the way you have described your blog post and that you were remembering the memories you had on your holiday. Why I also like your post is because you have explained every little detail and when you said neighborhood kids, loud ocean waves and howling wind I could see a picture of everyone of those things, nice work keep it up. Did the lemon noodles taste like anything you have ever tasted before?
Kia ora Hannah, my name is Jayden and I am a student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about “Captivating Recount” because I like the way you have described your blog post and that you were remembering the memories you had on your holiday. You taught me that lemon noodles a yuck. Was it fun making that story?
Hello Hannah my name is Manu I am a year six at Paihia School. Your post was pretty interesting I loved the part when you added the lemon noodles sound yuck but the duck noodles sound yumm. The smoothie that you added sounds so refreshing. I loved the part when you added the dogs.
Kia ora Hannah, I really enjoyed reading your descriptive holiday recount and the way you used the five senses to describe what you did in the holidays. Maybe you could add a photo/drawing to go with your Captivating recount. Keep up the great writing, blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Hello Hannah, my name is Angela and I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I like your post about “Captivating Recount” because you have described everything you did in the holidays in a way where it was really interesting to read. By the way you have described everything, it sounded like you had a lot of fun. What was the best part about what you did in the holidays? Bye Bye!
Kia ora Hannah. My name is Delaney and I like the way you described your blog and my favourite games is fortnite sims 4 minecraft dead island and naruto. My favourite kai is pizza. Bye.
Hi Hannah my name is Jade, I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about “ Captivating recount “ because you have stated everything you did in the holidays in a easy way to understand. I have never made a blog post about “ Captivating recount “ but I would like to because from how you described everything, it sounds like you really enjoyed it. What do you want to do next holidays?
Hello Hannah my name is Jaelyn - Marie, I am a Year 6 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about “captivating recount” because I like the way you have described your blog post and that you were remembering the memories you had on your holiday. Why I also like your post is because you have explained every little detail and when you said neighborhood kids, loud ocean waves and howling wind I could see a picture of everyone of those things, nice work keep it up.
ReplyDeleteDid the lemon noodles taste like anything you have ever tasted before?
Hey Jaelyn-Marie thank you for replying to my writing. The noodles were not like anything i had tasted in my life.
DeleteKia ora Hannah, my name is Jayden and I am a student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about “Captivating Recount” because I like the way you have described your blog post and that you were remembering the memories you had on your holiday. You taught me that lemon noodles a yuck.
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Hello Hannah my name is Manu I am a year six at Paihia School. Your post was pretty interesting I loved the part when you added the lemon noodles sound yuck but the duck noodles sound yumm. The smoothie that you added sounds so refreshing. I loved the part when you added the dogs.
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Hi Manu, thank you for commenting on my blog post. The duck noodles were very yum.The soothie was refreshing as well! Bye, Hannah.
DeleteKia ora Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your descriptive holiday recount and the way you used the five senses to describe what you did in the holidays. Maybe you could add a photo/drawing to go with your Captivating recount. Keep up the great writing, blog ya later! Ms Peters.
ReplyDeleteHello Hannah, my name is Angela and I am a year 8 student from Paihia School. I like your post about “Captivating Recount” because you have described everything you did in the holidays in a way where it was really interesting to read. By the way you have described everything, it sounded like you had a lot of fun. What was the best part about what you did in the holidays?
Bye Bye!
Kia ora Hannah. My name is Delaney and I like the way you described your blog and my favourite games is fortnite sims 4 minecraft dead island and naruto. My favourite kai is pizza. Bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah my name is Jade, I am a year 8 student at Paihia School. I really like your blog post about “ Captivating recount “ because you have stated everything you did in the holidays in a easy way to understand. I have never made a blog post about “ Captivating recount “ but I would like to because from how you described everything, it sounds like you really enjoyed it. What do you want to do next holidays?
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