Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Hannah, I enjoyed the part where you had a go at creating a Labour day DLO. Did you think about taking a screenshot of your Reading response doc and then adding it to a Labour day slide deck so it can be read easily? To improve, you could work on making sure your blog post layout is done correctly. Mīharo! Haere rā, Ms Peters.
Kia Ora Hannah my name is Jaelyn - Marie and I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I like your blog post about “labour day reading DLO” because I like your DLO and you did amazing on your research. I also liked your blog post because I like that you added what you learnt, what you enjoyed and what you found challenging. What was something you learnt that surprised you?
Kia ora Hannah, I enjoyed the part where you had a go at creating a Labour day DLO. Did you think about taking a screenshot of your Reading response doc and then adding it to a Labour day slide deck so it can be read easily? To improve, you could work on making sure your blog post layout is done correctly. Mīharo! Haere rā, Ms Peters.
ReplyDeleteHi Ms peters. I didn't think of taking a screen shot. Thanks for leaving a positive & helpful comment. Bye!
DeleteKia Ora Hannah my name is Jaelyn - Marie and I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I like your blog post about “labour day reading DLO” because I like your DLO and you did amazing on your research. I also liked your blog post because I like that you added what you learnt, what you enjoyed and what you found challenging.
ReplyDeleteWhat was something you learnt that surprised you?